The sex was abrupt, and the end was difficult to believe and took me out of the story. Mature sex I have trouble accepting that if your crush said he loved you, you would just go to sleep. It gets better with practice, and your confidence will improve.Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-27 06:50:44Sorry that comment was stupidAnonymous readerReport 2016-08-27 06:50:07I like cats. … Pussy cats. …Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-08 17:19:05exciting story an I had a friend like James same name, an I awoke in the middle of the nite and he was sucking my cock, at first it scared me but then things got better and I ended up getting sucked and fucked for the first time and since has loved it mostly the cum eating.ErectskippyReport 2015-10-22 15:24:20I agree you had an awesome build up but the sex was anti climatic. The sex was abrupt, and the end was difficult to believe and took me out of the story. That said, I encourage you to keep writing. 12 comments«123»Randy MacAnusReport 2018-07-01 08:05:09You have good potential as a writer. I have trouble
