3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 04:10:04Where is Chapter #1 Could not find itanonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 03:33:58Not bad if it’s your first story, writing could use some depth, and where is the first chapter?anonymous readerReport 2013-04-27 12:48:51Very poor content and everything run together. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 04:10:04Where is Chapter #1 Could not find itanonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 03:33:58Not bad if it’s your first story, writing could use some depth, and where is the first chapter?anonymous readerReport 2013-04-27 12:48:51Very poor content and everything run together. Mature sex Not worth the time too read it.«1» Not worth the time too read it.«1» Not worth the time too read it.«1» Not worth the time too read it.«1» Not worth the time too read it.«1» Not worth the time too read it.«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 04:10:04Where is Chapter #1 Could not find itanonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 03:33:58Not bad if it’s your first story, writing could use some depth, and where is the first chapter?anonymous readerReport 2013-04-27 12:48:51Very poor content and everything run together.
