Being more graphic would detract from the romance. Mature sex Being more graphic would detract from the romance. This isn’t a graphic story, it’s a romantic story. Good love making also involves a lot more foreplay than you described. This isn’t a graphic story, it’s a romantic story. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-26 22:15:01A GOOD STORY YOU COULD HAVE GONE INTO MORE DEPTH IN THIER LOVE MAKING KEEP TRYINGthesilent1Report 2013-03-05 18:38:51Well, I had enjoyed reading your first shared story on here. I felt that the sex scene was decent, but it could had be more drawn out with more sexual foreplay. Good love making also involves a lot more foreplay than you described. My only grievance is that it ends too quickly. My only grievance is that it ends too quickly. This isn’t a graphic story, it’s a romantic story. ;)«12» The more the foreplay, the more intense the climax.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-06 23:31:58it’s a good story with lots of romanceanonymous readerReport 2012-11-03 15:08:14I must disagree about being more graphic.
