enjoyed the action.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-07 10:32:19Yucky hairy dude and first / third person problem, but otherwise alright.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-06 04:21:25Eh, wasn’t great, but not bad. Mature sex Other than that it was great.«12» Other than that it was great.«12» 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-24 23:23:50i loved the storry, not so much the bear type man, but the story, hotrobdavisReport 2011-06-07 12:38:56writer had a problem changing from first person to third==inconsistent. enjoyed the action.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-07 10:32:19Yucky hairy dude and first / third person problem, but otherwise alright.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-06 04:21:25Eh, wasn’t great, but not bad. Other than that it was great.«12» enjoyed the action.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-07 10:32:19Yucky hairy dude and first / third person problem, but otherwise alright.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-06 04:21:25Eh, wasn’t great, but not bad. Could tell it was a female writer before I looked at the info.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-05 16:28:58The perspective of the person was changed alot. 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-24 23:23:50i loved the storry, not so much the bear type man, but the story, hotrobdavisReport 2011-06-07 12:38:56writer had a problem changing from first person to third==inconsistent.
