Your only redeeming factor is that you have a fairly vivid imagination, since I truly doubt that this is based on real life events. Mature sex I would highly recommend that you continue writing but PLEASE find an editor program to assist you in the future.«123» i simply wrote a story from my past to let go of it. so even if u do call the cops they can’t do a thing.plus if u are so against this kind of stuff why did u read it? Your grammar is on a 3rd grade level and your over all composition and editing are nonexistent. thank you to all that like our story as i write on here i will work on my grammar and spelling issues.The EditorReport 2010-07-14 17:11:00Have you ever tried using a word processor? 14 comments«123»greencarnage13Report 2011-01-19 03:44:40i loved ur story but wat happen who opened the door n came in n did ya get caught i want 2 read of wat happen nextgreencarnage13Report 2011-01-19 03:44:28i loved ur story but wat happen who
