Go ahead, name any one prominent female character in five seconds who doesn’t have sex eventually in the story. If it’s not just a stroke story, don’t always make it about the sex, check. Mature porn Perhaps I should have clarified at the beginning, but let me make clear that I’m not suggesting that fbailey, blueheatt or any of the other quick-to-the-sex writers are bad. Imagine that. In no sense of the word. Character development and how the characters acted in mundane situations or other problems non-sex-related happened, because that’s how real life plays out. DISCLAIMER: I hate incest. It not only ruins stories, it gives a lot of potentially great writers the wrong impression when it comes to writing good stories with solid characters. Over-excessive punctuation in dialogue is another big one. In every other way it’s unremarkable (it showcases how punctuation can make your story silly among other things) but I have to say, for a stroke story it doesn’t status play really well.
