9/10- for grammatical errors…Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-05 18:57:06nice buildup, but NOTHING HAPPENED… I should know, i’m a writer myself! Mature sex There’s more to life than just sex! 5/10
NO ‘cum swallowing’ or ‘consensual sex’ – mistagged.READERReport 2006-07-16 15:01:54always stick-up for family nice story even if it is fiction willie tREADERReport 2006-01-14 19:25:24you have a good start. 9/10- for grammatical errors…Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-05 18:57:06nice buildup, but NOTHING HAPPENED… To me, it shows u have real potential and actually care about the characters- that’s what a real writer does, even writers like Zane. cant wait until the next part«123» 5/10
NO ‘cum swallowing’ or ‘consensual sex’ – mistagged.READERReport 2006-07-16 15:01:54always stick-up for family nice story even if it is fiction willie tREADERReport 2006-01-14 19:25:24you have a good start. Much obliged.ReaderReport 2009-07-05 20:57:52Well, I liked it! Much obliged.ReaderReport 2009-07-05 20:57:52Well, I liked it! cant wait until the next part«123» Much obliged.ReaderReport 2009-07-05 20:57:52Well, I liked it! There’s more to life than just sex! Much obliged.ReaderReport 2009-07-05 20:57:52Well, I liked it! cant wait until the next part«123» Much obliged.ReaderReport 2009-07-05 20:57:52Well, I liked it!
