I guess a neutral vote is in order because, like I said before, you have great ideas; you just need to tell them better.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 20:21:01First of all, this isn’t true. Mature sex However, the beginning was strong but then on the end with the sex, you totally let us down. I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. You’re a fucked up person! I am not tearing you down or anything, but your style feels rushed and even a quick look-over before posting would benefit your writing. However, the beginning was strong but then on the end with the sex, you totally let us down. I am not going to sugar coat it; your storytelling ability is horrendous. I guess a neutral vote is in order because, like I said before, you have great ideas; you just need to tell them better.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 20:21:01First of all, this isn’t true.
